請各位專家對我奇葩的Vericant的面試做下評價:我在最后自我展示的兩分鐘內(nèi)說了一下My dream,大概就是study hard at high school then get a chance to study at top university in America to learn Economics knowledge, and after graduation I am going to work in an international company maybe to learn their marketing strategies et cetera, and finally I am going to run my own company and use the money I earn to establish many foundations for poor people and poor animals in this world 重點(diǎn)來了 and to help the mother nature because people in this world now never stop exploiting our mother nature, and for their own benefit they never get tired of exploiting it, few people actually care about it, so I really want to save it. 就在說這段話時,我默默的流淚了,但我不是有意的,可能是房間里的燈太亮很刺眼讓我的淚腺發(fā)達(dá)了一句時,然后默默流了兩三滴淚水就馬上說I am sorry, 真的覺得自己很奇葩,面試官面試完對我說 it is okay, you were very emotional。請問專家,我這一舉動是會對我的面試加分還是扣分呢?
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SAVE THE WORLD這類的話題是大學(xué)申請短文和面試的大忌。你的表現(xiàn)即使是發(fā)自內(nèi)心的,也不見得對你有利。關(guān)鍵是無新意,蒼白沒有說服力。前半部分和后半部分的內(nèi)容所反映的理念和價值觀不一致,很難使人信服。無論是短文還是面試,真實(shí)的,身邊的,平凡的,實(shí)際的,親身感悟的才是最能引起共鳴的。如果拯救動物是你的夢想的一部分,你可以從你的一貫行為中展示你的真實(shí)關(guān)懷,比如長期喂養(yǎng)家附近的流浪貓,看到受傷的鳥兒會停下來查看并想辦法幫助等等。因?yàn)閴粝氲男纬墒怯性搭^的。